Quick Write 22/7 By Lynkyn
One day there was a boy named Darren. He was with his parents on their boat and with their dog named Buddy. One stormy night Darren woke up and he went on the deck of the boat. He fell off and he passed out in the water.
When he awoke he heard people playing bagpipes and he found himself on a desert island. The bagpipes came from a ruined castle. He yelled out ."Hello!" and the bagpipes stopped. Then two twins ran out and they were the ones playing the bagpipes. They brought Darren into the castle and it hit night fall.
They brought Darren to one of the towers and they went up. It was a bedroom. Darren was so tired he fell asleep straight away. The next morning they saw a boat and they ran out of the castle. They got the boat's attention and it was Darren's parents. Then Darren and the twins were saved.
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